I love my backyard! One of the reasons I love my backyard is because it has a beautiful view. Another reason is when it rains and stops raining, I see a beautiful rainbow. I see many sunsets at night. Where I live in, southern California, we just had a very big migration of butterflies. They came fluttering through my backyard.
Here is a photo that I took when there were dark clouds in the sky. A storm is rolling in!
Here is a photo about one hour later when the dark clouds had moved toward the north! As you can see, the view is always changing.
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Do you have a backyard with a beautiful view?
If not, tell me about a time when you were somewhere that had a great view.
What differences do you notice in the two pictures other than the different clouds?